Bogus Trust Poem by MarieLove Brevil

Bogus Trust

Rating: 3.5


It’s obvious, it’s so obvious
That you meant to hurt me
Throughout your little games and childish play
Your doggish thoughts and acts
You have forgotten that I’m humane
A person with emotions; a good person
Some day when inside of me
Recalls what you’ve done to me
I almost tend to become a bitter person
But what can I do that isn’t my forte
I wonder if there’s a person in you
If you’re not just an object
Something that just carries the shape of a human
I wonder are you some type of devil
You must be…even the ones that
Crucified Jesus felt bad at the end
I should’ve known better; you were
Too at ease on the other side
Your heart was into what I dislike
I put my trust in flesh and blood
Now I’m hurt; well deserved!
Cause I should have known better.

Marie S. Brévil

MarieLove
1/08/05

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
glen still 26 February 2006

i like the fact that u used 'humane' compared to human'..set that apart from who we are and what we do... ecellent line... b@peace gcs

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