The surface of the lake
was bruised
with a darkness
that could not have been borrowed.
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Great poem, Pablo, especially gratifying when it was penned by a fellow countryman. Please submit more of your works. Greetings from Costa Rica... Rod
this poem is very close to what I'm feeling. Thank you very much.
and instead make sense by your senses when was the last time you were free touching the rough cat's tongue, says Chuck Taylor