Thursday, August 14, 2008

Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

Try me?
If you really want to
The depth of your eyes are black
And you don't hold me like you used to
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Carla Nestoros
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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 August 2008

love yet intense reasons blue ire when breaths glowers the reeks.........................wonderful imagery of love that happens to happen between the lover and belioved, when uncontrolled.well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Tanya Stanford 14 August 2008

Your partner needs to appreciate you. If not move on. Brillian poem. Love the emotions and free flowing word use.

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