Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Broken Doe Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Among dead leaves and scattered branches
the broken doe lies panting in the breeze,
long forsaking its struggle to rise and run,
quietly awaits nature's final decrees.
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William Coyne
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Edmund Strolis 17 November 2015

No Disney scene of mother doe's life departing and with her goes the life of two. Your writing is stark, honest and sadly beautiful in its wording. 10

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William Coyne

William Coyne

Chicago, Illinois
William Coyne
William Coyne
Chicago, Illinois
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