Broken Soul Poem by bobby kramer jr.

Broken Soul



A life full of emptiness,
a heart full of pain,
eyes tired from crying,
a smile that is so plain.
A head full of many thoughts,
ears that hear the negative things,
shoulders that are getting numb,
legs that can't stop trembling.
Hands tired from wiping tears,
feet are hard and sore,
I'm trying not to give up
but I'm stumbling to the floor.
This pain is eating my soul
I'm at the point of break
but I got to keep moving
I don't know how much more I can take.
I'm trying to stay focused
and make it to the end
obstacles are hitting me from everywhere
again and again and again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
RyuOh Kenshin 02 August 2008

i love the rhyming and the use of words in your poem. I hope you can make threw your obstacles.

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