Thursday, September 2, 2010

Brokenheart Comments

Rating: 5.0

broken heart
caused by you and your liddo games
said you luved me and changed around and said
you didnt anymore
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Bianca Herrera
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Kevin Carney 02 September 2010

Nice write I like the way you incorperate almost text language into your poem. It a good write with nice flow. I can relate to this.

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