Donte Trezevant

Rookie (Halloween / The Pit Of Darkness, The Light)

Brown Sugar - Poem by Donte Trezevant

Her Smile lights up rooms
Makes heads turn
His body urning
For her sight filled stair
Passionate fire in her eyes
As they danced in the pink light
That passion reached a new height
Burning sensation
Slurring his speech
With her metaphorgasums
Her slight moves and tounge play
Extended his extension
His Mind sang a song
That reminded him of the fire he could
Only blaze with her
If only she would
As his song ended
And time passed
There feelings clashed
She makes him feel…….
This emotion he never felt before
She opened his door
With a gold key
And a slight star like glow
She super
And she’ll always be
Brown Sugar


Comments about Brown Sugar by Donte Trezevant

  • (3/23/2010 9:43:00 AM)


    he extended his extension means he got hard lmao (Report) Reply

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  • (1/25/2010 10:23:00 AM)


    extended his extension? means (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 25, 2010



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