Samhitha Bharadwaj

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Butterfly Song - Poem by Samhitha Bharadwaj

See the butterfly
Its so nice.

It fly from one flower
To another flower,
To drink its nectar.

See the butterfly
Its so nice.

Its so colorful,
I like it so much,
Everyone come and see
How beautiful butterfly is.

See the butterfly
Its so nice.

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Posting on behalf of my 6 year old daughter Samhitha....... written on 03-08-2015. I feel this is the best poem of all that she has wrote so far, and this is my favorite.

When she was learning butterfly life cycle in school. I asked her to write a poem on “butterfly”. She told me that she do not know much about the butterfly to write the poem. So, I took her to butterfly park near in our city, where you find different butterfly and explained her about the butterfly.
After two days when I asked her to tell me the poem, I was shocked to hear this poem. I have recorded the original version in her own voice. The one that I have wrote here is a bit edited, to polish it to look good. However, I have taken care not to overcorrect it and destroy the originality in my daughter’s poem. You can judge based on the audio and your comments are appreciated.
She feel that the poem should have a tune and should sound like a song. So, she tries to sing her poems… however I have tough time telling here how it is not necessary and how to break the poem into lines and para…
If you guys have some good link or thoughts do share it with me. Meanwhile enjoy the poem.

Comments about Butterfly Song by Samhitha Bharadwaj

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/4/2015 12:31:00 AM)

    Tell Samhita that she is already a poetess at this age of 6. Encourage her. she will become a great poetess if she goes on writing. tell her please. thank you very much. tony (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 2, 2015

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