nice ending with the pun " bye the lake! " . I do wish you had added a hint of the changing friendship or an introduction of that part of the poem's meaning towards the end like a cliffhanger. I say this because I do not get the feelings of love except for the love of nature unless that is what you intended. :)
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nice ending with the pun " bye the lake! " . I do wish you had added a hint of the changing friendship or an introduction of that part of the poem's meaning towards the end like a cliffhanger. I say this because I do not get the feelings of love except for the love of nature unless that is what you intended. :)