Monday, November 1, 2004

Cant Wait To See U Again.... Comments

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When life is cruel,
And I don't know what to do,
Don't foget me, Because I love you.
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Majeed Vorajee
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Friggin Elle 26 June 2007

Seriously your use of English is childlike. Your poetry has a creepy, stalker-like quality. Expend your energy doing zikr. You will find it more rewarding.

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