SinJace Ramos

Charm - Poem by SinJace Ramos

My heart a virgin, my soul still new
The very first day, that I met you
But as the years, slowly rolled by
Fate would step in, my love denied
Filling the void, in other's arms
Couldn't help me, escape your charm
Soon I will reach, the end of the road
Waiting for a love, my heart is owed
It seems as far, as I can foresee
It will be like this, till eternity

Comments about Charm by SinJace Ramos

  • Luis Estable (10/5/2011 5:19:00 PM)

    There are two or three trite lines here. If you had not wriiten them this poem could have turned out much better, but those two or three lines sound like to much cliche and take a bit from the poem.Such lines are to be put side when trying to pen good or great poetry or better one`s poetic abilities.

    The best to you now!

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 5, 2011

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