Friday, January 3, 2003

Choices Comments

Rating: 3.0

i prefer smooth peanut butter
to crunchy
mind you
crunchy is all right
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Laura Sewell
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Daniel Brick 16 March 2017

This is a clever poem which is written in a witty speech of a highly opinionated person. She does not fully realize how much of her personality she is revealing in this overload of her likes and dislikes. These may be trivial issues but they make up what we encounter everyday in the mental as well as the spoken chatter in our daily live.She summons us to the HERE AND NOW of immediate experience instead of daydreams and worries. A ZEN master would praise her for this clear focus!

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Joshua Gilchrist 29 March 2010

I loved reading this. Great Job!

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Joshua Gilchrist 29 March 2010

I loved reading this. Great Job!

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