Clubbing Blows Poem by Dan Brown

Clubbing Blows

Rating: 2.8

Noise.
Such noise.
Lights, and
people, and
noise.
Such noise.
Cramming,
jamming,
can’t keep breathing.
Crushing,
rushing,
gently squeezing
the air from my lungs,
colour from my face.
Running from light,
can’t win this race.
People dancing,
pain lancing
my every single cell.
Temperature rise,
no time for goodbyes,
burning up in this Hell.
Try for the door,
crash to the floor,
no-one sees a thing.
Noise.
Such noise.
From the angels as they sing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 21 May 2006

Sounds more like baby seal slaughtering to me Dan! lol They do have chill out rooms I hear! Smiling at you, Tai

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Dan Brown

Dan Brown

Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
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