Friday, January 16, 2009

Cold Water Comments

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Water is cold water is wet,
Water is cold and can be a big mess...

Water is a teer dropp running down your cheek,
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Alexandra Greif
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GOOD TRY 02 December 2019

I don't get it. It sounds like its written by a 8 year old. But nice try. Great inspiration.

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Annisa Tonge 12 February 2009

nice poem its really really cool i used it for my homework

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Alexandra Greif

Alexandra Greif

Angleton TX
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