Coming Up For Air.......... Poem by LOST PRINCESS

Coming Up For Air..........

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held under water
for too long
the pressure getting higher
and higher
and higher
until i drown in the dark
im kept in the dark
for too long
the pressure getting harder
and harder
and harder
to handle in the dark
i cant take it anymore
i have to come up for air sometime
sometime or never
now or i drown in the dark
and not living to see the world
as it is
i want to come up for air
when i am with you i can breathe
and you pull me up for air
and i see the world as it is
and not how it should be
its just about that time that

im coming up for air.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nangula Immanuel 20 May 2009

Great poem! I love how the repetition of higher and harder makes it more intense, like i am the one who can't breathe. Really good! !

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~ Jon London ~ 27 February 2009

Great piece, well placed words of clear thought

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