Sunday, June 18, 2006

Computer Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

A face freckled with a million pixel shadows
tumbles through cyberspace to be with me,
and for a moment, she is mine!
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Hale Tsehlana
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Nick Percowycz 18 June 2006

What a unique poem this one is. I can tell you are very creative, Hale! But I do have one question though. What happens when your computer freezes? Does that mean a break-up, or an arguement? I enjoyed your poem very much. My computer is sending your computer- A ten!

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