Congestion Poem by Jason Murak

Congestion



Congested
Like NYC traffic
Like to many peaches in a little girls basket
Pressure
Like temperature changes
Causing whirlwinds tossing tins
Admiration
Like a tribe of heathens
Breathin' for the sun, seeing bright eyes from their creator
Opening their hearts in song
From a distance
Attraction
Driving me like pistons
Conveying feelings into poetry, though nobody
listens

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Briannaa Herman. 27 September 2010

I like how you can rhyme words I would never think could rhyme You are magnificent!

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Jason Murak

Jason Murak

Long Island New York
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