Wednesday, January 9, 2008

Conquering Element Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the ethereal white darkness past twilight
The growl of the wind rushed to his ears.
Trees buckled, bent in the sway of the fierce storm.
The twist of the roving watch light cut
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Amber Lamb 18 July 2008

Can't help but love when a poem paints a story, which this one did very well

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 10 January 2008

thats really good i like the way you write your poems nice and smooth it has a really nice ending to it keep up the great work :)

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Joshua Mapp

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