Friday, October 2, 2009

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Fear of hunger?
Not at all.
I will not prostitute my soul
for a piece of bread
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Hazel Buchan Cameron
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Susan Jarvis 02 October 2009

These few well chosen, carefully arranged, and subtly rhymed words pack a potent punch - minimal use of language to maximum effect. S :)

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