Credo Poem by Isa .
Credo
Wind in my hair,
the moonlight I walk.
Alone forever
yet to you I talk.
Hidden by my shadows
In the sunlight you squak.
You said to let go,
but how does one let go that never held on?
In sorrow and anger
trying to break in.
My wall stands strong,
but for you it walks thin.
The robot that defines me
starting to break off.
I'm not ready to let go,
but he's ready to move on.
Meditate on what you have written above, say for 5-10 minutes, and then get more specific as regards what actually happened and then write in detail about that
On Poem like this, I think you need to think for awhile about what you have written, meditate
Okay. Let me try once more. I don't know if you are receiving my comments.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/30/2024 5:25:31 AM # 1.0.0.1119
What you have here is a first draft, not a finished poem. You need to work harder to articulate your emotions to the reader—meditate on these first drafts and then get down to who, when, what, where and why, the why being really important to your poem. Good luck!