Critics ***** Welcome Criticism Poem by Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

Critics ***** Welcome Criticism

Rating: 5.0


Who provokes
my english usage
are thoughtless
crook
meaningless

don't worry
my writing points
strictly not for genius critics
universal grammarians

i am penning down poems
following the lay man's trend
of my mind
expecting not
unexpectable highly intellectual readers

enough that my low cost fellowmen
can cuddle my priceless thoughts!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 28 May 2009

good thought 10...Rommel

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Keshav Prasad 28 May 2009

nice msg

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Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

a.k.a. Jetfellow Marchanism
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