Thursday, July 7, 2011

Crossroads Of Life Comments

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Through the dark I’m told you can see a light
A candles glow that can seem so bright
Her spirit faltered for its weak
The murky waters are often bleak
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Adeline Foster 08 July 2011

The last stanza does make sense. I prefer poetry that is condensed into what I call droplets of suggestion. In many words there is disorder. An edited phrase is a well turned phrase. That last line may be called a well turned phrase. Adeline

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