PHIL WINTER

Rookie - 157 Points (January 22nd / Berbice Guyana South America)

Cruel Dream Breaker. - Poem by PHIL WINTER

You shattered my mind,
Dream breaker!
When you moved the hands
That held me close
To your heart.
I was torn!
I felt the pain
Piercing through every vein!
I knelt and kissed the dust!
I sifted sand
And tried to trap the wind
Within my hand!
In my state of madness
I could not tell
Spring from summer
Nor heaven from hell!
I sat and grieved
Upon the ground,
The rains poured down
And drenched me to the bone.


Comments about Cruel Dream Breaker. by PHIL WINTER

  • (9/16/2011 11:39:00 PM)


    Thank you very much for this inspiring poem. A lot of us can relate to it. (Report) Reply

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  • The devils Girl (1/28/2010 9:32:00 AM)


    omg i love this poem i feel this way too believe me. we should talk :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2010



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