Sunday, October 19, 2008

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i look out my window
@ 7 in the evening
my heart falls apart
all the bandaids get ripped off.
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ally lira
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Sasha Claire Beckains 02 May 2009

wow ally. thats touching. really it is.

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Ershad Mazumder 20 October 2008

Expressed all your feelings and pains nicely. I am impressed. But this can not be termed as a poem. This a short story in a poetic style. Thanks a lot.

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