Cry To God Comments

Hey great write, for some reason, I believe you could do more. I would put more in depth meaning to it, maybe making it more passionate. It's a tad bit on the surface, to inspire people in indoctrination will not usually work. Though it's a great write, I'd love to hear see if you could do more with it. You got a good start, I'd just like you to convince me, why I would want to be a Christian. I am, in case your wondering, a Christian. Though it would not inspire me to be one or completely recommit my life to him. Dear Friend Aaron C