Chlo'e Procter

Daddy's Little Girl..

Daddy's little girl,
all sad and blue.
Nobody she can even talk to.
Mummy's angry,
daddy's not proud.
Suddenly she's being followed, by a dark cloud.
Full of sadness, grief and despair,
nobody listens, nobody even cares.
Would they miss her if she wasn't there?
She takes a long walk, to maybe clear her head,
But she just cant forget what her Daddy had said..
'Your worthless, your scum,
I can't believe what you have done.
I just wish, you didn't exist,
then I could forget all of this'.
She crosses the bridge, not all the way but half.
Gets to the edge, and does nothing but laugh.
'My life is joke, I'm a loser - royally crowned'.
Lifts both legs over, and falls to the ground.
Within a second she is gone.
If only her Daddy had known what he'd done,
She'd be alive, and he wouldn't of pulled the trigger on his gun.

Poem Submitted: Friday, January 18, 2008

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Comments about Daddy's Little Girl.. by Chlo'e Procter

  • Lauren S (1/18/2008 11:43:00 AM)

    This is really well written.
    it has a lot of power in its word and gives a really good clear message.
    Hopefully people will think before they speak as some never realise their consequences.

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  • Mz.Honesty Only (1/18/2008 11:34:00 AM)

    I give you a ten this is a great poem.

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  • LOVEFOOL Aka (1/18/2008 11:28:00 AM)

    wow intense poem very good

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