Thursday, February 18, 2010

Dancing Flowers Comments

Rating: 2.8

the wind swirls round and round
the flowers dance
watch them sway
like a ballarena
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Shelby Kaitlin Taylor
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Lynn Glover 28 June 2010

Lovely poem of flowers and the movement in the wind. A good write Kate, keep up the good work. Try rhyming one time and see how it works. Lynn

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Shelby Kaitlin Taylor

Shelby Kaitlin Taylor

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