Monday, April 29, 2013

Daughter Comments

Rating: 4.5

Soft like rose
With small toes
Innocent like mist
With a pink bangle on her wrist
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Nilam Pathak
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Kavya 05 December 2019

Very nice though and poem

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Vasundhra 16 August 2019

Very nice poem mam

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Monika gupta 03 May 2019

She had love in her eyes.Which still give me highs. A very true sentence.

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Monika gupta 03 May 2019

V. Nice poem 👌🙏

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Gajanan Mishra 29 April 2013

heart is clean as water/ definition of daughter, wonderful and true. I included this poem as favorite one, I also added you as my favorite poet with this poem. thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 29 April 2013

To build a life of her own. fine ending. good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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