should have gone deeper, use more emotions to tell this story of Death creeping in. Give more details about the window, tell how death creeps in....in what motion, slowly, fast, quickly. How does it feel, what is your reaction.Lying there without a motion...are you cold? do you see fear?
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should have gone deeper, use more emotions to tell this story of Death creeping in. Give more details about the window, tell how death creeps in....in what motion, slowly, fast, quickly. How does it feel, what is your reaction.Lying there without a motion...are you cold? do you see fear?