Death's Hour Comments

This is a terrifying expression of good things suddenly perverted into violence The experience which should be one of union, shared bliss, a source of beautiful memories, becomes its polar opposite: the man grabbed his pleasure with brutal unconcern for his partner. it was a betrayal of so many good things: trust, caring, mutuality. The fact that you can write this poem shows your strength of character. This poem is a way to begin the healing.