Sunday, June 8, 2014

Delicate Thoughts Comments

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Subtle was the breeze and the clouds had the shine,
The horizon had imbibed a shade of crimson wine:
The air was pink by the vermilion of the sky
You were the breeze and the sky was your eye,
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Saadat Tahir 08 June 2014

Subtle was the breeze and the clouds had the shine, The horizon had imbibed a shade of crimson wine: delicate... lovely word play liked your poem write more :)

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