Delicious Eclipse Poem by Mary Staples

Delicious Eclipse

Rating: 4.0


Crescent sun, blackened moon,
Sliding slow across around the earth
Like strawberry jam slipping out
Of a hot buttery croissant.

Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: astronomy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Yummy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Staples 22 August 2017

Honey may be a better simile than strawberry jam but they are all carbs.

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