Friday, August 1, 2008

Demon Herd (Revised) (Not Suitable For Young Children) Comments

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Round-Up Time (Prelude)

Cowboys from Hell ride on this range.
There's no skin on their bones, now isn't that strange?
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Mary Naylor
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Alison Cassidy 09 August 2008

I'm not convinced that young children wouldn't absolutely 'love' this wonderful Halloween poem with its fire and brimstone and hooves of thunder. Great use of rhythm, Mary - the reader can really feel the ferocity of your demon herd and also smile at the extravagance of your narrative. Excellent poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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