Marwan Asaad

Depression

As i go out to get my eye checked

The ride to the clinic felt so good

Listening to music and seeing the real life

I felt like myself again, but knew it wasnt for long

Knowing ill be back to a place i call hell

Sadness in my heart, filled with nothing but pain

Stuck in this place with no where to go

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 7, 2009
Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 29, 2011

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Comments about Depression by Marwan Asaad

  • Danny H (10/8/2009 10:04:00 PM)

    Always so terrible, how we loose ourselves.
    Pain, Repression, Anger can control us and change us
    Im glad there was a moment where you felt like your old self
    keep up the poetry!

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  • Hanaa Art Nabil RashedHanaa Art Nabil Rashed (10/8/2009 5:32:00 PM)

    you may reminds me of Sexton please boy life is so beautiful and you must be proud of yourself to be in such place. good work but try to express more about your inner feelings i think you will get more

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  • Marwan Asaad (10/7/2009 11:56:00 AM)

    im in a military school right now, its my first year here! thats wat this poem is about!

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