Wednesday, February 9, 2011

Devil's Dance Comments

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Weeping voices in a place of rot.
A place of stench where the wormd dieth not.

Billowing smoke and banshees scream.
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John Castro
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Teresa Dearing 09 February 2011

Nicely painted picture, well balanced, opening and closing. Title grabs your interest, and it flows well to the end.

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