Tuesday, January 1, 2008

Dirge For Darfur Comments

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The wind,
Strums the strings,
Of the trees,
Tortured, distorted harps,
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Mary Naylor
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Meggie Gultiano 12 January 2008

Mary, this is excellently beautiful! I am glad you have made comment on my poem.You write well, and this is a marvelous piece of your, the flow of words are gently beautiful.Thanks for sharing this! Love, Meggie

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Alison Cassidy 12 January 2008

What a painfully observed, eloquently penned rant against a terrible war. Superb use of the sounds of nature as a metaphor for the horror and anguish you feel. No reader could but be moved by your words. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 07 January 2008

Absolutely beautiful. Even the trees weep for Darfur.Who could read this and remain untouched? Extraordinary.Mary. Always your Friend, Sandra

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