This is more of a song than a poem
Its not finished but I would love to get your feedback! ! !
It was Saturday and raining,
I was feeling sad
So sick of your complaining,
How you make me feel bad,
I guess you've forgotten
That there was you and me,
I guess there's nothing left,
Except for one thing you should see,
Do you remember?
Do you recall?
Something not so diffferent,
Not different at all,
But as, you see we grow apart,
It seems you're tearing out my heart,
Why can't you stop this childish game?
When you don't really feel the same,
You really remember?
You really recall?
It wasn't so different,
It wasn't so different,
At all...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
AWESOME! ! ! i luv this poem! really good! my lil bro likes ot 2!