Sunday, December 9, 2007

Doing It Alone Comments

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I'm not strong anymore
Like i used to be
I feel like there's someone else
Living inside of me
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Carla Nestoros
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Paul Hansford 29 August 2009

A very interesting structure to this poem, with its short verses at the start and end, and the repetition and skillful, natural rhyming in the middle section, and it also manages to express a very complex set of emotions.

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