Dont Give Up Poem by andrew espinosa

Dont Give Up



every day goin through the same problem...
its gettin harder each day...
i belive in our love..
so much that everyday i think ur here wit me even though ur miles.. away the feeling of ur hand holdin my hand i hold urs together helpin each other in bad times and good times..
we could make it..
have faith and belive in ur heart..
doing hear wat other people say..
we could make it if we both belive in our way...
we both got strong hearts...
mine is still working because ur love is keepin it srtong...
ur is the same way because my lvoe 4 you is never goin 2 change...
belive in ur heart as u belive in ur self...
4 the place that ur standin...
livin is belivin...
belivin is givin...
and givin love is belivin in ur heart 4 givin it...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

it was a wonderful poem expressing a real time situation i applaud you for your ability to be both concise and yet descriptive as you allow insight into the modern mindset Weiermann

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Gayatri Nambiar 10 August 2008

you show your grade in this andrew...a standing ovation you deserve in reverse gear... Gai

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