Dreaming Under The Pine :) Poem by Bojoy Barredo

Dreaming Under The Pine :)

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It was raining outside and I'm sitting under the pine
Few minutes later, I fall asleep
With a smile on my face, when I saw your godliness
In a photograph you brought into my mem'ries.

When your skin touches my skin, I feel ignite..
When you embrace me, I feel warmth and delight...
When you hold me, my head would only say
'Please hold me a little longer dear as I am your mine'.

We walk through a path, holding each other's hand
I feel like in heaven, no worries and fears even
I was tempted to kiss you, but instead I swallow
Rather, I'd stop my walk and say 'I am happy of being with you'.

You held tight my hand and replied 'I want to be with you now and show you my love'
You kiss me at the forehead once and say 'that would be enough for today'
Might be tomorrow would change and tell you 'much better now if I'd kiss you twice a day'
And the day after tomorrow is a very special day, coz you let me kiss on your nose tip and tell me 'dear, don't leave me here'.

My heart beats fast as I woke up
I feel like I am in paradise you brought me into, which I thought it was all true
It was only a dram, and I want it to be real
I just realize maybe you're the missing piece, that no one can ever replace.

Monday, January 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 14 January 2016

Great poem with a profound metaphor. Keep writing, great work.

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