Dreams And Lies Poem by tiffany de vega

Dreams And Lies



Before I closed my eyes
laid myself to sleep
you're all I saw
you're all I prayed for

Now in my dreams is you
holding my hands as we walk
laughing as if tomorrow might never come
looking deeply into my eyes

Slow dancing in the dim lights
saying you were all I wanted
pledging not to leave each other's side
you are my life

Hoping dreams won't end
wishing I may never wake
yet it was all dreams
dreams that can barely come true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosherwan Khan 07 June 2008

You have given a good difference between dreams & reality.however you have gone in a single direction.Try to give some refernce from the environment&surroundings.The poem is written in good language nevevrtheless.

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tiffany de vega

tiffany de vega

manila, philippines
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