Drowning Poem by Novice Writer

I liked you the moment I laid my eyes on you.
For who am I to argue, that my heart doesn't belong to you.

Every move that you made.
Every smile that you showed.
Every time that you looked,
Into me, I felt breathless.
My heart beats fast.
But the world slowed down.

Petals falling, some are rotting
Some dried up, but some blossoms
Oh what beautiful flower.
Fragrance drifting along the breeze.

it was worth a mile to take the risk
So I tried and I succeed.
Oh, what is this feeling.
Its not just because of its beauty.
I'm drowning
As time goes by, I fall deeper and deeper in your eyes.