Dying From Numbness Comments

In the first line, I think it would sound better if you took out the first no, so it would be 'To feel numbness no more, ' and the 3rd lines of the 1st and last stanza are a bit wonky... So you could fix that. But remember, poetry is an expression of yourself, so if you think it sounds better the way you have it, and meant it to be that way, then do not change it! The idea for this poem is great, and it flows really nicely. Overall, good job!