Thursday, July 16, 2009

Dying Star Comments

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As if the world's started falling apart
as if I'm carrying a broken heart
I stare at you as it comes undone
I'm lying awake but now I'm gone
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Alone Soul
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Emma Adamyan 18 April 2010

as wonderful as sad! ! ! fulfilled with grief

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Emerald Eyes 16 January 2010

OMG! ! ..but life does get better..! ! this is a great read.. i can truly madly deeply feel the words in this poem.. its like its right in front of me.. like i can picture it.. and i know there are alot of people who feels this too i think youre a great poet.. i love it..

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