Early Afternoon Poem by Margaret Moran

Early Afternoon

Rating: 4.0


My eyes keep closing
Dozing with my head nodding
Hard to stay awake

Friday, February 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: awakening
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There are times for doing and times for resting. Our body language talks and reminds us of what is reality!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard D Remler 09 February 2019

short and to the point. I've never written a haiku, so I don't know much about 'em, but it was an enjoyable read, and I like the economy of words. All in all a fun read. Nice work. tfs

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