Ashley Olson

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Emptiness - Poem by Ashley Olson

The blood that falls from my heart is not pain
Though it's the tears from my eyes
For red is not showing but it's the emptiness from my soul
For I would die then live but live to die
Nor how deep you go no pain I will feel
Theirs nothing you can do that I havent done to myself
Theirs just things that you wouldn't understand
And how my life goes that's one thing you will never get
People say 'picture you in my shoes'
I dont have to because I know the shoe wont fit

Comments about Emptiness by Ashley Olson

  • (10/3/2005 8:35:00 AM)

    I feel the same way..I mean In the same snse I feel that same way... but youare are right I wouldnt fit in 'your shoes' you wouldnd fit in mine that is how life is but I really like it...You are really good at writting potery keep it up I look forward to reading many more to come... (Report)Reply

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  • (5/24/2005 7:16:00 PM)

    hey, i really liked your poem! i write a lot of poems when im upset of even when i feel anything. it just helps me out when ever i need to get somthing off my mind. its better than doing things that may hurt me or the people around me! and i still gets my point out (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 27, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 27, 2005

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