Enlighten Me (My 1st Song Writing) Poem by Petai Jirakongpipat

Enlighten Me (My 1st Song Writing)



Nobody is perfect, so am I
I can smile, or gone mad
They called me bitch
Yeah, I'm glad
The thing is you're with me, next to me

So Baby, why do you look at me like this?
I'm joking you, but you don't exist
You hide your feelings
I hide my broken smile
Yeah, I'm broken inside

Tell me what's going wrong? What's going wrong?
You fade away. What's going on?
Tell me, teach me, fix me
Pull me up from the pool
'Cause I'm drowning fool

Come on to me
Enlighten me, fix me
Hang me up in the sky
Baby, just like you did before

Do you see my hands wave in the air?
I'm saying hi and you walk by
Baby, you don't care
You pull me up. And push me down
'Cause I've changed or you're changing now

Tell me what's going wrong? What's going wrong?
You fade away. What's going on?
Tell me, teach me, fix me
Pull me up from the pool
'Cause I'm drowning fool

Come on to me
Enlighten me, fix me
Hang me up in the sky
Baby, just like you did before

Don't let us be apart too far
Just tell me and we will mend this thing
Before time took us too far
I don't want it ends like this

Tell me what's going wrong? What's going wrong?
You fade away. What's going on?
Tell me, teach me, fix me
Pull me up from the pool
'Cause I'm drowning fool

I don't want it ends like this

Thursday, July 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,lost love,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My first time try to writing song. I have melody in my head while writing this too. But I can't write them. I'm not good at music lol

I got an inspiration of this from friendship. But I think it told about love too.

Please add Taylor Swift's or Avril Lavigne's music style. Enjoy!
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