Monday, March 19, 2007

Every Time I Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every time I cry,
I feel you.
Shivers and chills go
down my back.
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lisa parks
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Sometimes(though it may be most difficult & heartwrenching) , we must be the ones to be strong, take the reins, and sever the angst that is mal-controlling our lives...I like the concept here, Lisa...as well as the crisp, mellifluous structure. A commendable job, young lady... ~F.J.R. ~

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