Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Everytime You Let Me Down Comments

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Every time u let me down
I beat myself about it
Beat myself that I believed
Beat myself that I dared dream
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MANDY CLARISSA
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G.Y Hammed 25 October 2011

Nice poem. Rhythmically ok. The message is clear. A few good rhymes and it is musical.

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