Sunday, December 30, 2007

Fabric Of Life Comments

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the bullet rips through the night
like a needle trailing a thread of blood
mending together the fabric of my life,
but the rain is falling and drowning me in self-guilt,
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Aaron Combs 21 January 2008

i agreee with aka vaiper... it's sad but very good.. comment my poems...if you wil..thakns

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unknown Viper 30 December 2007

well written poem...sad though...keep on writing...

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